Day and Nigth flash comic practice

Added a pair of squares compared to the original and it has color (difference between it's counterpart, but it consumed more time and patience)

I wanted to use this style of flash comic, do you like it? I feel like a mix of page comic and square by square comics styles XD

oh yeah... I also censored the characters names and the type of warriors, please don't hate me this thing is just a kind of practice, and I have no idea what to use so I took a page of my comic

enjoy =P

oh! other thing, actually those are the provitional colors of the characters, I'm now in the 6th notebook but because it is just by pencil, I never thougth of some colors for them XD, and I don't want them to resemble other characters (like Y-- would resemble a lot of Emily XD cause it's the same lineart)

and yes, I think the comic plot is quite threshed, it's hard to have a never used idea, but I think the way I develope the story is what gives it taste ;P